Awesome Newspaper Writing by Garuth

Hi Room 1,

Just sharing this piece of writing Garuth has completed for his Must Do this week. He has made a prediction about what happens next in the story, then written a newspaper piece which informs the reader of his predictions for the story (which have come true). Well done Garuth!

Excellent Descriptive Writing

Have a read of Kiran's descriptive writing from our Monday task.
He chose the topic of a spooky house. Kiran has done an excellent job of using descriptive language (such as adjectives and adverbs). He has also thought about using some of the senses (touch, hearing, sight, taste, smell) to guide details in his writing. For example, he has included sights, sounds, and feelings. Awesome work, Kiran!

Can you spot any adverbs, adjectives, or parts were Kiran has used one of the senses to give detail? Have a read and comment below if you can point some features out! You can also leave comments on his blog post directly.