He chose the topic of a spooky house. Kiran has done an excellent job of using descriptive language (such as adjectives and adverbs). He has also thought about using some of the senses (touch, hearing, sight, taste, smell) to guide details in his writing. For example, he has included sights, sounds, and feelings. Awesome work, Kiran!
Can you spot any adverbs, adjectives, or parts were Kiran has used one of the senses to give detail? Have a read and comment below if you can point some features out! You can also leave comments on his blog post directly.
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Kiran, it certainly sounds haunted! Great use of punctuation. Next time, I wonder if you could begin your sentences in different ways? - Mrs Taege
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